Peer Review Comments

For Crystal L. :

Very good start. I can pull at least three themes without even reading the book, but by rather just reading your draft. Good Summary. Good character analysis. Good generalizations at the end. There's no obvious weaknesses but maybe you can expand and go beyond by throwing a character analysis between Macbeth and Hamlet, but it's not really necessary.

For Jackson F. :

Seems like you have a basic summary on what the book is about. What you can maybe expand upon is maybe including a good hook in the beginning of your draft and also working on a good conclusion that will summarize possible themes of the book and also include a few generalizations. To make it more interesting, include any interpretations you might have of the book by including an analysis of the main character or other characters.

For Jasmine G. :

You have a basic draft done and overall it sounds pretty good. Maybe you can expand upon this draft by providing more background information about the characters. There's a lot of possibilities in which you can make good connections such as the one Alyssa states about making a connection to the way people in the past used to speak compared to now.